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How to use ReadyMocks feedback: a worked example

See how to turn feedback into a specific revision, with an original email excerpt, an improved version, and an explanation of practice score limits.

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Start with the task

Suppose an email task asks you to explain a renovation-noise problem, describe its effect, and request a solution. Feedback is useful when it identifies a change you can make in the response to that task.

A response that needs development

Original practice excerpt

The noise is bad and I cannot do my things. Please fix it soon.

Editorial feedback on this excerpt: the reader knows you dislike the noise, but does not know when it happens, what it interrupts, or which action would help. Develop those details before adding more complex vocabulary. This commentary is a teaching example, not a saved AI assessment or an official rating.

Make the revision concrete

Revised excerpt

The drilling has started before 7 a.m. on three mornings this week. Because I work evening shifts, it has interrupted my sleep. Could you ask the contractor to begin noisy work after 9 a.m. and share a weekly schedule?

  • When: before 7 a.m., on three mornings.
  • Effect: interrupted sleep after evening shifts.
  • Request: a later start and a posted schedule.

Apply the same process in ReadyMocks

  • Complete the timed task and submit your response.
  • When your access includes AI assessment, read the comments alongside your original answer.
  • Choose one observable issue, such as a missing task point or an unsupported reason.
  • Revise that part, then try a fresh prompt to see whether you can apply the improvement independently.

AI assessment availability depends on your plan, included allowance, credits, and the selected activity. Read the access information before requesting an assessment. A practice estimate is not an official CELPIP result.

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